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novindalf in deathbydrabbles

Not Everything Lasts

Jan 01, 2012 01:57

Title: Not Everything Lasts
Rating: PG
Word count: 155 words
Characters/Pairings: Isabella, Guy
Prompt: Isabella; peace
Summary: She lay on the hillside, one arm flung above her head, basking in the sunset.
Notes: Title from Michael Buble's Haven't Met You Yet. As you can see, did not manage to write a drabble for every prompt, and this is my last for ( Read more... )

#rh_drabblefest 2011, char: isabella, rating: pg, char: guy

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novindalf January 1 2012, 13:52:20 UTC

Thank you!! =)

ladykate63 January 1 2012, 17:16:33 UTC

Oh, wow. That's lovely. Great job of using the description to convey the mood of the event (especially in the last line).

(Typo: "His voice soundly as heavy as her heart felt.")

an_lagat_glas February 2 2012, 04:19:48 UTC

Oh, Isabella!

I love your imagery in this--both the description of the scene and the metaphor!

novindalf February 5 2012, 14:18:59 UTC

Thank you very much!