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novindalf in deathbydrabbles

Caught Out

Dec 19, 2011 18:56

Title: Caught Out
Rating: R
Word count: 232 words
Characters/Pairings: Guy, Marian; Guy/Marian
Prompt: Guy; sexy alone time
Summary: Almost sexy alone time for Guy...
Notes: Ahem. I think I'll be needing that paper bag to put over my head again...

( Caught Out )

rating: r, char: marian, pair: guy/marian, #rh_drabblefest 2011, char: guy

Comments 7

thymelady December 19 2011, 19:29:44 UTC

Ohhh yes yes yesssss!! Thank you, honey, you make my DAAAAAAY!! Love it!! 8-)))

novindalf December 19 2011, 19:30:40 UTC

Um, wow. Was not expecting that reaction! =P

thymelady December 19 2011, 19:42:18 UTC

Why not, my dear? It's very true to their characters. He would be crazy about her, she would be wild about him, he would feel like he was almost sexually attacking her all the time and try to give her some space - but she wouldn't want to. Rings very true to my view of this pairing. :-) Yes, I have a dirty mind, but YOWSA, this is a hot couple!!

Also, I really like the element of reality, the way you describe his good handiwork with Marian but also his handiwork directed to himself. He would be oblivious to the fact that she'd wake up and enjoy the sight, and not leaving him alone. ;-)

No paper bag, keep your head high and say 'I'm an awesome writer of good smut.' Nothing wrong with that. :-D

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novindalf December 19 2011, 21:11:59 UTC

Don't worry, it seems I've taken up permanent residence there... =D

the_silverdoe December 19 2011, 20:56:52 UTC

GNUUH! (Which is my 'Oh my God, this is hot, my mind can't think anymore' sound, just so you know ;)

novindalf December 19 2011, 21:14:05 UTC

Eeee, thank you!

meridian_rose December 20 2011, 17:29:57 UTC

:D I don't think you need a paper bag though. Smut fic perhaps, but well told smut fic and with a strong underlying romantic feel to it.