Comments | deathbyaccident: DBSK Fic #1.5: Anata no Memory Chapter 5

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DBSK Fic #1.5: Anata no Memory Chapter 5

Jul 20, 2007 21:12

Title : Anata no Memory(chaptered)
Parts: Chapter 5/15 + Epilogue
Pairing : [DBSK Fandom] JaeChun at prologue. Oh wait, don't run away! JaeHo, of course.
Rating : PG, drama, AU
Author : Randix
Disclaimer : No, the boys belong to themselves. I'm just a poor writer.
Summary : /AU/ How on earth will Yunho and Jae Joong find themselves together, when ( Read more... )

dbsk, jaeho, jaechun

Comments 47

alexandracwz July 20 2007, 14:45:44 UTC

SPOT!

alexandracwz July 20 2007, 15:08:34 UTC

OMG. I'M FIRST FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER! AND FOR MY FAVE FANFIC, TOO! xD
The beginning of the chapter was angsty, it made me sad. :( But as it gradually got to the end, it went back to it's usual funny fluff. You can write both fluff and angst really good! ^^
The lover's quarrel was so funny! Especially those 2 women. To outsiders, it does look like a lover's quarrel. :D

That’s the third stage of WHD, Yunho cleared his throat, trying not to choke on his coffee when Jae Joong absent-mindedly licked the mayonnaise at the side of his mouth.
^ Yunho's trying to explain something very serious yet he gets turned on by Jae Joong's sexiness. LOL.

Why was Junsu crying? Homesick probably? My poor baby. :( Junsu and Yoo Chun have a common interest: Jae Joong! Me, too! xD
Nice chapter! Update soon! :)

sisca_tvxq July 20 2007, 14:52:00 UTC

SPOT !!!

sisca_tvxq July 20 2007, 16:00:21 UTC

Gosh ! I'm crying again !
poor Jae *huggles jae*
Yunho, you better find a cure for this stupid WHD !!!

That’s the third stage of WHD, Yunho cleared his throat, trying not to choke on his coffee when Jae Joong absent-mindedly licked the mayonnaise at the side of his mouth.
LOL sometimes jae is really guilible (is this the right word ???) that he is SEXY <333 esp his tounge ! gah *dies*

Update soon <333

moonbin_is_love July 20 2007, 14:56:17 UTC

meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

moonbin_is_love July 20 2007, 16:50:23 UTC

yunho ya~ u must find a way to heal Jaejoong
T_T
*please dont die jaejoong!*

yeah and that lovers quarell XD
i spotted yoosu moment at yoochun;s mail 8DDD

update soon <3

rainbowpebbles July 20 2007, 15:47:26 UTC

OHOHO XD

rainbowpebbles July 20 2007, 16:07:47 UTC

yay for this chapter!!! :D :D :D

the interaction between jae and his mom was so cute ^o^ sweet to see how much they rely and care for each other. very, very endearing (:

and i SEE MORE YOOSU XDDDDD go chunnie!!! ^____________^ that's the way!!! *waves GIGANTIC yoosu banner* heheheheh.

jaejoong getting hospitalised!!! does that mean more jaeho interaction??? *wiggles eyebrows* HAHAHA!!!

love for this chappie, as much as i have the rest!!! <333

joongielover July 20 2007, 15:52:42 UTC

Awwwwww! Jaejoong... I feel bad for him~
I wonder what will happen when his loved ones find out, =.=
I hope he gets better, and Yunho finds a cure :D.
(he better not die.)
^^! Anyway, this chapter was... hahaha, funny.
Freakin' women... LOL. yes yes. hahaha =D!!!
Update soon~