DSBK Fic #1.3: Anata no Memory Chapter 3

[deathbyaccident]

Title : Anata no Memory(chaptered)
Parts: Chapter 3/?
Pairing : [DBSK Fandom] JaeChun at prologue. Oh wait, don't run away! JaeHo, of course.
Rating : PG, drama, AU
Author : Randix
Disclaimer : No, the boys belong to themselves. I'm just a poor writer.
Summary : /AU/ How on earth will Yunho and Jae Joong find themselves together, when JaeChun has a

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[rainbowpebbles]

SPOT ME ME!!

[rainbowpebbles]

now you've posted yours but i haven't posted mine :P :P :P i haven't even finished writing it yet!! ^_^ lol. heading out for a CPR test in 10 minutes...hopefully it'll be done after i get back. hopefully XD

Is it you?” Dr. Song asked in wonder, his eyes wide. Suddenly, he took Jae Joong’s hand on his own, “Is it you, the mysterious magical gim-bahp cook of the hamtaro lunch -“

DR. SONG. OMG. he KILLS XD XD XD it got me laughing so hard. "hamtaro lunchbox" is beginning to sound like part of a title. like in the knights of the round table. okay okay i'm going nuts~ ^______

[rainbowpebbles]

oh shit i forget I'M FIRST AGAIN!!!! :DDDDDDDDD

[deathbyaccident]

Yes, your first in this chapter! ILU! <3 *gives you cookies* Haha, the knights of the round table bit really got me laughing. And yes, Yunnie is such a good hyung to protect Chunnie from a spoon. HOMG what a knight. :)

I can't wait to write the Yoosu soon too. *catches one dbsk photobook because I want one too* And I know I commented before but. . . kyaah I love your latest chapter of Meet You There, never mind if it gave me a heartache. But you said the Jaeho is gonna kick in soon ne? Yayy! *feels better*

[enkhgerel]

Under the Sea, Under the Sea, I'll be back.

[enkhgerel]

You know, I like kimbab better than sushi, maybe because i was introduced to it first.
I don't know why, but whenever i read your story, i feel the emotions. Like in this chapter, (the whole time i was worried about Jaejoong) when you desctibed how sleepy Yunho was, i felt it.

I like the original draft better. I guess Jaejoong didn't want to tell about his conditions huh?
Well, update soon.

[deathbyaccident]

:) Wow, I'm glad I was able to convey the emotions well. *hugs you*

Yes, it's JJ's bad habit - hiding (some) things (about him) from people because he's just. . like that. ^_^

[munkeemajick]

yayyyy!!! new chappie!!! ^^

[munkeemajick]

OMG. Dr. Song. gotta love him lol. the magical cook of the kimbab XDD. i wanna eat joongie's kimbab now :(

and joongie can never be separated from hamtaro lol. love that soo much. and jaejoong's little note to junsu about how to clean a stain. that seems so jaejoong-like. i love how you described the scene between yunho and jaejoong where jaejoong notices that yunho's looking a little too tired. i can feel the jaeho coming on. (esp the little undressing yunho with his eyes scene... we all know he wasnt really thinking about yoochun XD)

as usual, i love the emails between jaejoong and junsu and yoochun so very much. they tell us these little side stories that give us info that is needed to check up on yoosu.

man, i cant wait for the next chapter. this one was slightly more lighthearted so i feel like im in for a crash. is the next gonna be really sad/angsty? :(

anyway, update as soon as possible.

<3,
~Elle

[deathbyaccident]

Thanks for reading, dearie. And this one: we all know he wasnt really thinking about yoochun, LOL that really made me laugh! Hmm, yeah, the chapter was a little light-hearted. Hmm, as for your question as to whether the next one is gonna be sad. . .I posted the next chapter already, so I hope you'll be able to read that as well.

Yayy, thanks for reading my story. :) *gives you cookies*

[314159]

asklgajkgajsd omg this chapter was so GOOD, not in the least bit disappointing!

Then, he realized that he had stuck out his tongue too! Oh dammit, what was he trying to do -

I LOVE Joongie in this, he is such a space cadet <3333 and his "fingers having a mind of their own" and everything akslfjasd. I love it when Jaejoong is portrayed as a very spacey person because he totally IS ♥!! can't wait to read more!

[deathbyaccident]

I agree, I agree. Yes, space cadet!Joongie is love! When he spaces out, he's just totally adorable, gaaah. I feel like squishing him but I'm sure Yunnie will get in my way because he's possessive like that, lol Thanks for reading and commenting, dear!

And oh oh, I've posted the next chapter as well, so I'm hope you'll be able to read that too! *gives you cookies*

[crazzyme8]

i'm so happy to see that you've updated. keep it up!

[deathbyaccident]

:D Thanks for reading!