Evolved (1/1)

[dearygirl]

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: None
Rating: Hard R for language and sex.
Word Count: 3757
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Description: Jeff and Annie spent the summer… getting to know each other. If you’re looking for a lot of plot, you won’t find it here.
Author’s Note: To everyone reading guess what we’ll discover: First, I love you. Second, it is still very much

Comments

[imbettygrable]

Woohee, that was STEAMY. I think I need to cool down my computer...

This was very well written! You're a very good writer!

[dearygirl]

HEE! Thank you so much!

[crittab]

Sweet and hot. Best kind :)

Great job.

[dearygirl]

I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thank you!!!

[blithers]

Um, yeah. Holy hell lady, you should write more smut, because this is totally sexy and wonderfully hot. I kind of love the stories where Jeff and Annie start out as a more casual, hot and heavy thing (because: chemistry!) so this just hits the sweet spot for me.

Later that night as they’re all leaving he gives her a side hug and she smiles

Is it strange that in the midst of this story that made me smile a lot, because the side hug thing is totally something they DO, and it makes me happy because I've never noticed it specifically before?

Also, I could totally ready a whole story of Britta and Troy arguing. :D

[dearygirl]

Haha, writing smut always scares me a little! So, I'm glad this works. And they really do side-hug a lot don't they? Just another one of those "crutches" they use to keep each other distance, I suppose.

I would absolutely read an entire fic about Britta and Troy arguing because they would be arguing on a nonsensical level that no one else would even be able to understand. I love them.

And thank you for the comment!

[thebadunkadunk]

There are too many things I liked about this fic so to just sum it up: LOVE.

Beautifully written too!

[dearygirl]

Aww, thank you! I also LOVE this comment!

[blond_bear]

I'm pretty much speechless - that was SO freaking awesome, fantastic and hot. I don't even know how to express how freaking awesome, fantastic and hot it was. So in conclusion - freaking awesome, fantastic and hot.

Yeah. You rock. That is all :)

[dearygirl]

YOU ROCK! THANK YOU!!!