Comments | dearygirl: guess what we'll discover (3/11)

dearygirl

guess what we'll discover (3/11)

Sep 15, 2011 14:42

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: Only for the 3x01 episode title
Word Count: 4998
Rating: PG-13, for language
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Description: Jeff gets a new roommate.
Author's Note: I love everyone in this bar. Especially 0penhearts for beta'ing this monstrosity.

( Have you ever spent an entire day just doing nothing? )

community, guess what we'll discover, fanfiction, jeff/annie

Comments 38

second_shooter September 15 2011, 22:47:14 UTC

This was so beautiful I didn't want it to end. Can't wait for the next chapter!

dearygirl October 2 2011, 03:32:18 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I promise it won't be too much longer until the next chapter is posted!

logicisfailing September 15 2011, 23:25:56 UTC

I'm really loving this story! I can see Abed wanting to be true to the show and name the kid Angus (think how horrififed they'd be at that haha). Update soon!

logicisfailing September 15 2011, 23:36:29 UTC

I'm enjoying the nice long chapters btw. Good writing + long chapters = me losing myself in the story (a very welcome thing in my opinion!)

dearygirl October 2 2011, 03:33:17 UTC

Yay! That's such a nice thing to say! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

na_thalia September 16 2011, 02:23:52 UTC

I think what I like best about this fic is that it's so realistic. I could see things happening like this - there's no willful suspension of disbelief, there's no 'hmm, that's a little out of character' and so on. It's just so believable! And of course, it's Jeff and Annie ;->

dearygirl October 2 2011, 03:34:03 UTC

THANK YOU! I'm so glad it feels in-character; I love Jeff and Annie so I want to be as true to them as possible. I'm glad it's working!

treblebeth September 16 2011, 03:47:56 UTC

No one writes Jeff and Annie the way you do, honestly. The dynamic you've created here just seems like a richer or enhanced version of that we get to see and I just love it. I love all your evocative little details. Just so great.

Phineas and Ferb are building a time machine Extra awesome points for the idea that Jeff watches Phineas and Ferb :)

dearygirl October 2 2011, 03:41:36 UTC

Oh, thank you! You're so sweet.

The image of Jeff sitting around watching cartoons delights me and Phineas and Ferb is AWESOME, so it just had to happen.

0penhearts September 16 2011, 07:05:06 UTC

“Mmm. How long was I sleeping?
“Um, about an hour. You move a lot in your sleep.”
“Sorry.”
“It’s cool. I… You looked cold.”
“Oh. Thank you.”
“Yeah.”

Yes I had to c/p that whole bit. Because *FLAILMAGEDDON*

“It’s a sign.”
“That we shouldn’t get married?”
He looks over, something twisting low in his stomach.
YUP. UH-HUH. YESSS.

Jeff cocks his head and watches her through the bars, “I could just leave you here, you know.”
Just, this is one of my favorite Jeff-and-Annie-isms ever in the world.

HEY GUESS WHAT.

dearygirl September 17 2011, 06:24:55 UTC

WHAT?

0penhearts September 17 2011, 06:27:50 UTC

HAHA!

Also, right now it is roughly half an hour from TOMORROW. AND I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.

ALSO SEND ME MORE OF THIS STORY.

That's WHAT.

dearygirl September 17 2011, 06:36:42 UTC

COMMUNITY BENDER WEEKEND, WE ARE ALMOST IN YOU.

Ugh. I'm having stupid writer's block issues. I'm praying for inspiration from this weekend. Which, DUH. Is pretty much a certainty.

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