guess what we'll discover (5/11)

Dec 12, 2011 22:23

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 5,878
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Description: Jeff gets a new roommate
Author’s Note: Okay, I’m so sorry this took such a ridiculously long time to post. There were real life issues and then computer issues and motivational issues all piled up on top of each other. But here it is! For those of you ( Read more... )

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This made my night alwaysjane December 13 2011, 07:02:28 UTC
Coming out of my lurking cave to let you know how much I enjoyed this. I have been hoping for an update to this lovely story and you delivered. The final scene with the mirror was intense. I love being swept away with their banter and then hit with their tension.

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Re: This made my night dearygirl December 19 2011, 05:20:29 UTC
Thanks! I really try to keep up a balance of lighthearted banter and tension, so I'm glad it's working!

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ext_462401 December 13 2011, 07:42:45 UTC
Woh, the mirror, the eye contact, the hands on the hips, that was really woh.
Lovely chapter I'm enjoying this story so much!

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ext_462401 December 13 2011, 07:45:42 UTC
OMG AND I JUST REALISED THAT YOU ARE THE WRITER OF DEPTH PERCEPTION AND HOME WHICH ARE 2 OF MY FAVOURITE FANFICS EVER! Whenever somebody wants to read a Community fanfic I show them Depth Perception; it was the first fanfic that I read in this fandom!

Yeah I fangirl you.

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dearygirl December 19 2011, 05:19:30 UTC
Awww. Thank you. That means a lot to me. Those fics are kind of dear to my heart because they were some of the first ones that I wrote. This comment just made my night, so thank you again.

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poppypickle December 13 2011, 07:42:49 UTC
AH! I was so excited to see that you had updated this story! I love, love, loved this chapter. Their car banter was RIDICULOUSLY adorable and I loved the last scene. Now please let them make out. ;-)

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dearygirl December 19 2011, 05:16:36 UTC
Their banter is SO much fun just to write, which is probably why there's so much of it in this fic. And no worries, the making out is coming. :) Glad you're still enjoying this!

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thebadunkadunk December 13 2011, 07:52:42 UTC
Omg bb please don't make us wait that long for another chapter please! I love where you're taking this story ♥

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dearygirl December 19 2011, 05:14:09 UTC
So sorry it took so long to update! The past few months just got away from me. But I'm glad you're still reading and loving it! Thank you.

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0penhearts December 13 2011, 08:19:11 UTC
Annie gasps, “It was an emergency. I had really bad split ends. And I told you that in confidence.”
STILL MY FAVORITE!

Her lips pursed in thought, she reaches for the radio, but Jeff bats her hand away without even looking at her.
Ahahahaha, I didn't even fully realize that was in here until now :) It's the next blueberries.

She thinks about coming home to find Jeff in the kitchen making dinner with a hand towel slung over his shoulder, the way he squints his eyes and kind of blinks a lot when he gets sleepy, the fact that he always, always steals the last chunk of Oreo cookie out of the ice cream but then kind of shrugs apologetically and smiles and promises to buy more.
*wibbles*

It’s more than a little bit disgusting, but there’s something in the way the kid seems to instinctively trust him enough to snuggle up to him like this that makes Jeff heart constrict in his chest.

“Sup, kid?” he asks with a smile.If I weren't already pregnant I'm pretty sure all the Jeff-being-adorable-with-children in this chapter would have totally ( ... )

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dearygirl December 19 2011, 05:46:12 UTC
ANY TIME YOU WANT TO PREVIEW UPCOMING ATTRACTIIONS FROM THIS GEM, YOU KNOW I'M GAME.

I WILL BE TAKING YOU UP ON THIS OFFER SOON.

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