I'D RATHER NOT STUDY, PLZKTHX. *avoids instead*
melted metal and the way raindrops erode fear
Caspian X; PG; General / 300 words
Prompt: "Raindrops" by Regina Spektor.
"Warning(s)": A lack of capitalization, punctuation that breaks all the rules, and one made-up word. Blame McCarthy's All the Pretty Horses.
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*Reads again and stares at it*
Your introductory sentence threw me. It reads as if it's from Peter's point of view, but the piece is from Caspian's. That probably wouldn't be a problem in normal prose storytelling, but here I think it is, since the piece is so very introspective.
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