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penguingeek in dearestlilybean

sun/shine (narnia; ed)

Aug 29, 2008 16:53

sun/shine
Edmund; G; General / 200 words
Prompt: "paint the sky with stars," 100foraslan

( Edmund paints them, the sun and the moon. The sun shines brighter. )

-100foraslan, character: edmund pevensie, fandom: chronicles of narnia

Comments 4

ayumi_nb August 30 2008, 03:14:42 UTC

That was good, i like it, i like it.

ineptshieldmaid August 30 2008, 03:59:24 UTC

Oh... as always, this is delightful. I like your Edmund, all careful and accurate but still artistic :)

samescenes September 1 2008, 03:20:08 UTC

Oh! I love this.

Even amid her foul expressions, she looks beautiful.
I have never read anything that captures the White Witch so succintly and beautifully.

babydracky September 1 2008, 10:34:45 UTC

This is a really beautiful text. So full of colour and life.