Original - Vicious Justice

[deannawol]

Name: Vicious Justice
World: Original Fiction
Words: 1023

Rating: R

Warnings: You read the rating. Be prepared. This ain't nice!

Comments

[aramuin]

Wow....

That was dark, freaky, scary and all the things you said it would be.

Very well done, hon.

Such a suitable punishment too.

[deannawol]

Well I did warn you ...

Can't sue me for fracturing your psyche ... *grin*

Took two tries to start it ... and lost the first start totally cause computer crashed.

[cygny]

Oh dear. This was really scary indeed. The character itself, the fact that he cut his own wrists was so very well described, it made me shiver. But that punishment, as you said, ten times worse.
Very dark, very nicely written. Bravo.

[deannawol]

Thank you ...

And it's all Alarielle's fault. She gave me the Tenacious D song, Tribute to the best song in the world.

The lines "Be ye angels? No we are but men!" sparked the whole thing off...

[redwolf]

Nice and dark.

[deannawol]

Glad you liked :)

Thanks.