Intriguing stuff, ancients in a future world, but what's their plans? I like it, just enough to get interested but not enough to really know anything, the ideal prologue.
That was the second draft of the prologue and was designed to try and illustrate some of the differences without revealing exactly who was talking, what she was apart from being about 15 centuries old, and setting up the plot for the next part. I think it did it.
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I like it, just enough to get interested but not enough to really know anything, the ideal prologue.
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*snuggles*
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Looking forward to reading more, hon!
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