Drag Me Into The Light

Mar 31, 2010 17:02

Title: Drag Me Into The Light
Characters: Eliot, Parker
Rating: PG
Warnings: very mild language
Length: 1995 words
Disclaimer: Not mine!

Summary: When a special job goes wrong, who can Eliot depend on?

Note: Alright, this is just a random stand alone one-shot that came to me. I COULD expand it at some point, as there's more story that could be told, ( Read more... )

leverage, drag me into the light, fic, parker, eliot spencer

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dreamers_dh March 31 2010, 07:07:33 UTC
That was really good.

I like how you pictured Eliot and Parker in this. Just like in the show. Good work!

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deannawesson March 31 2010, 08:59:14 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you very much for the kind words. Means a lot. :)

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blackbeltblondi March 31 2010, 09:32:10 UTC
Loved this! You captured both Eliot and Parker perfectly...and that can be pretty hard to do.

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deannawesson March 31 2010, 10:34:57 UTC
Thank you very much! It really means a lot to have you say that. Makes me feel I'm doing something right, so thank you. :)

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celtic_flicka March 31 2010, 13:51:32 UTC
I really enjoyed this! You got both characters down just right. And I love the way you used Eliot's habit of calling women "sweetheart" and "darlin'" (swoon) to disarm them, but here he's doing it to keep Parker from getting too upset. Love it.

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deannawesson April 1 2010, 01:06:36 UTC
Omg, I'm such a HUGE fan of Eliot's 'darlins'! :)

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Really, means so much. SO glad you enjoyed it!

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maab_connor March 31 2010, 21:04:52 UTC
this was sweet. and as an angst!whore, i just loved it to bits!

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deannawesson April 1 2010, 01:08:59 UTC
*laughs* Thank you, that's a great compliment since I know my stuff tends more towards shmoop than angst, so probably shouldn't appeal much. :) Thank you very much!

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gelbes_gilatier April 26 2010, 11:10:59 UTC
Ooooh, I love a good whump and that was... supreme :D Now, hope to see the comfort to the hurt in the next chapter ;)

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deannawesson April 27 2010, 08:51:25 UTC
Thank you! I actually had a lot of fun writing Eliot!whump so I'm glad you enjoy edit. :)

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