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deannawesson

Eye of the Storm (6/8) - A Step In The Right Direction

Oct 09, 2009 18:12

Title: A Step In The Right Direction
Characters: Eliot Spencer/Parker
Rating: PG-13 (to go up?)
Warnings: none
Length: 1151 words
Disclaimer: Not mine!

Summary: The hitter is in the fight of his life...does he surrender?

Note: Thank you so much for all your kind and encouraging words! You guys are really the reason I keep writing this. :)

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( All through breakfast, Eliot could feel eyes on him but when he glanced up at Parker, she was always looking down at her plate. )

leverage, fic, parker, eye of the storm, eliot spencer

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deannawesson October 10 2009, 05:08:38 UTC

Yah, Hardison's a bit of a cockblock without even knowing it. XD Fortunately, it SHOULD be easy enough for them to get to this point again in future...hopefully. :D

milydo October 9 2009, 10:48:48 UTC

Hardison better have a good reason to interrupt this or I'll kick his ass !!!

Great chapter ! Can't wait for more.

deannawesson October 10 2009, 05:09:23 UTC

I'm pretty sure that's the exact thing going through Eliot's mind too! XD

Thank you! More to come very soon. :)

alluranna October 9 2009, 14:35:40 UTC

Noooooooo! It was going SOOO well!! Darn Hardison anyway! *pouts* Well, at least they are moving in the right direction... but darn it!!!!! Great update darlin!

deannawesson October 10 2009, 05:11:12 UTC

It's so much fun to blame Hardison for things, though! And things should hopefully be a bit easier between them next time. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting! *hugs*

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deannawesson October 10 2009, 05:20:38 UTC

Not cool but still, so much fun to blame Hardison! XD

I seem to have a length that's comfortable for me to write and it's not very long so I apologize for that but I'm really, really glad it leaves you wanting more. :D I COULD try and string some of my shorter bits together into a longer chapter but then it would take longer to post...and I like giving you guys the smaller bits as soon as they're done. :)

I think things have changed for the better between these two now, though, so will probably see more fun soon. And I know what you mean...I HAD to put that in there if only because I personally would LOVE to play with his hair!

Thanks for the note, it's a good point. 'Throughout' might run just a bit smoother. Thank you! *hugs*

chrismouse October 10 2009, 00:27:54 UTC

I...honestly have no real problem with Hardison joining in here. That IS the reason he's calling, right? :P

deannawesson October 10 2009, 05:13:14 UTC

*lmao* That WOULD be an interesting story to tell, wouldn't it? Maybe once I get these two together I can look at other alternatives...though I think writing Hardison would be HARD!

Thank you so much for reading! :)