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deannawesson

Eye of the Storm (4/8) - Waking The Sleeping Lion

Oct 07, 2009 18:23

Title: Waking The Sleeping Lion
Characters: Eliot Spencer/Parker
Rating: PG-13 (to go up?)
Warnings: none
Length: 967 words
Disclaimer: Not mine!

Summary: Things might just be starting to change between the hitter and the thief.

Master Post

( Something was touching his hair. No, not something...somebody. )

leverage, fic, parker, eye of the storm, eliot spencer

Comments 5

milydo October 7 2009, 12:11:16 UTC

A kiss ! Yay !
But dude, this chapter is too short. TOO SHORT !
I DEMAND AN UPDATE !
...please ;)

chrismouse October 7 2009, 19:31:45 UTC

Wow. You really do have a gift for capturing their quintessence. Really glad to see these.

deannawesson October 8 2009, 06:20:47 UTC

Wow, thank you very much, really. Means a lot to hear you say that. I hope you continue to enjoy them. :)

alluranna October 7 2009, 21:17:09 UTC

Lovely! I adore how they are breaking down barriers without rushing into things! It makes them sweetly lovable, but still in character!

deannawesson October 8 2009, 06:21:45 UTC

Thank you! I really wanted to try and make it feel natural, so thank you for your kind words.