Fic: Readjustment, 1/1

[deaka]

Title: Readjustment
Author: deaka
Rating: Safe for kids
Characters: Obi-Wan Kenobi, Adi Gallia, Yoda
Timeframe: Roughly around the Clone Wars
Warnings: None

Disclaimer: All hail Lucas; I'm just playing in his GFFA

Summary: War changes everything

A/N: The Clone Wars is not an era I'm highly familiar with, so if there are inaccuracies - and there

Comments

[sandspirit]

Oh brilliant work as always! Obi-Wan's emotional exhaustion, and vague desperation, and a kind of helplessness, as it seems, when he thinks about Anakin, and his intention not to waver, and everything else.
I loved the descriptions, of Yoda for example, as 'an ocean, implacable and yet changeable, depths unknown', or the armour, 'those hard lines that kept the body straight'.

[deaka]

Thanks so much! Obi-Wan's a favourite of mine to write, though bizarrely enough I hardly ever do. I'm very glad that his characterisation worked. And it's great to hear that the description of Yoda stood out. I wanted to capture his cranky and mysterious glory. :p

Thanks again for reading and for the feedback!

[favouriteyear]

I love everything you write.

You capture the essences of characters so beautifully and so perfectly. You write them in such a way that in my head I can picture them perfectly doing and saying the very things you've written.

[deaka]

Thank you! I'm glad they come across that way, because Obi-Wan and Yoda are so distinctive that it can really throw you if they're not quite right. Glad you enjoyed, and thanks again for the lovely feedback. :D