Fated Chapter 2

Nov 01, 2009 15:09

Title Fated (For now. Any suggestions?)
Author: deadoralive0013
Pairing: Ryden
Rating: PG13
POV: 3rd
Summary: Ryan has a gift. He's able to see the future only, he couldn't control when. As he worked as a fortune teller, he made up lies to tell people, not really expecting to get a real vision. But one night, he met an annoying young businessman and Ryan's ( Read more... )

ryden fic, fated

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calmgravity November 1 2009, 10:34:32 UTC
FC!
*goes and read...*

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calmgravity November 1 2009, 10:37:21 UTC
OH MY GOD! *dies*

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FC! deadoralive0013 November 3 2009, 23:50:48 UTC
*pokes*

Is that good or bad? O__O

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Re: FC! calmgravity November 4 2009, 00:32:56 UTC
don't worry... it's a very good thing. :) ♥

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elmo_007 November 1 2009, 11:11:50 UTC
this is really great!!! I want more so bad now, I hate the stage in stories where everything is getting established....like meeting people, knowing things about them etc, it always has me going "nooo, i want more now!!" lol /bad comment...I have an exam in the morning, sorry I would have left a better one if i didnt have to cram hardcore.

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deadoralive0013 November 4 2009, 00:07:31 UTC
Hehe... thanks.

I have mixed feelings about beginnings of stories... when I write them, they're always fun but I also have to be careful because everything I write will become a constant to for he rest of the story.

HAHA!Cheers. I'm also a crammer. XD Good luck with the exam (though it's probably done already by this time).

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plus_vellocet November 1 2009, 15:20:36 UTC
Love this!

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deadoralive0013 November 4 2009, 00:07:57 UTC
Thank you. :D

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melissasandusky November 1 2009, 16:07:11 UTC
Moar please?! :D

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deadoralive0013 November 4 2009, 00:08:21 UTC
Sure.
Thanks for reading. :)

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etoilier November 1 2009, 16:58:54 UTC
Hey bb! I could totally beta this for you if you want ;)

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allonzee November 2 2009, 09:18:17 UTC
Oh hai there Merlin

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deadoralive0013 November 4 2009, 00:14:53 UTC
Hello there! :D

OMG... thanks! Okay, so Chai phoenix_vixen also volunteered to beta this fic but since you did it first, can you beta chapter 1 for me? I'll give chapter 2 to Chai so that I won't pile up work for you both (though my work is full of errors so you still probably have a lot of work XD).

Thanks again and... will you copy paste or should I send you the draft via email?

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