LASCIVIOUS BLOOD - 6/?

May 16, 2012 12:16

Title: Lascivious Blood
Chapter: 6/?
Author: deadlyscarlet
Beta:  fairy_melusina
Genre: AU/Romance/ Angst/ Supernatural
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Sex, Blood Fetish, Smut[in later chapters]
Pairings: Yuu/Kouyou for now
Bands: the GazettE for now maybe
Characters: Kouyou, Yuu, Takanori, Yutaka for now

Synopsis: For Takashima Kouyou who has been forced into studying something he ( Read more... )

yuu, smut, aoi, kouyou, vampire, romance, aoiha, lasciviousblood, uruha, angst, supernatural, aoixuruha

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veroxion May 16 2012, 13:55:45 UTC
THIS ISN'T A SHORT CHAPTER. I liked this chapter a lot... I feel bad for Kouyou, his desperation was clearly evident here... :(

Ahh but this chapter was a mixture of sweet and hot! Kouyou making Yuu drink his blood... <3 That was sexy, haha XD

Thanks for updating, sweetie! I'm looking forward to the next chapters!!

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deadlyscarlet May 16 2012, 17:10:29 UTC
I am so glad u dont find this short..it was hasty as i wanted to use my break for writing more..it really has been stressful...

I feel bad for Kouyou too *even though its me who is making it tat way (_ _)*

Yay!!! I m really glad u like tat scene it really was a lot of trouble and i was really scared...i had to narrate it to my sister in order to get some reassurance..at the end she was like tell me the truth were u secretly in love with someone? How the hell r u able to write all this LOL

i m so happy whenever i read ur comment sweet heart <3 I will try to update soon ^-^

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veroxion May 17 2012, 03:29:30 UTC
Aw, you did a good job, sweetie ^-^

Haha, I know... I feel bad for my characters as well, even though I've basically caused them to be sad. I think you wrote the scene lovely, it has a lot of desperation in it... which I completely adore <3

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deadlyscarlet May 17 2012, 04:22:17 UTC
thank u sweet heart ^^

yes anyone wud be angry if they realize they r only bein used..and Kou has gone thru a lot of betrayal already..so yes he is terribly desperate poor thing :(

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deadlyscarlet May 16 2012, 17:11:55 UTC
LOL sorry for the short update..i will try to update soon ^^

Yes Aoi love poor Uru already

I am so happy to see u commenting in my fics..it makes me so happy...thanx a lot dear <3

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darkmyvpleasure May 16 2012, 17:55:35 UTC
Ahhh! Short! >.< I wants moar!
I loved it, tho. I loved Uruha's attitude towards Aoi. A bit harsh but I don't blame him. Poor little ducky has been used by everybody and he just wants his blood back. (<- ironic prase. xD)
Anyways, can't wait for the next one. <3 By the way, I wasn't expecting anything 'hot'. I'm probably the only one, aren't I? xD

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deadlyscarlet May 16 2012, 18:10:36 UTC
Ah i m so happy hearin tat from u..tat part was really difficult and i was scared too..but i m so glad u liked it dear ^-^

i loved the ironic phase Uru wants the blood back no matter wat xD..

aw i m so sorry ducky darling i feel guilty for making everyone use u like tat T_T

thank u for commentin darlin <3 i will try to update soon..oh wow u r so clever..i thot everyone wud kill me off after seeing there were no intense love scenes

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darkmyvpleasure May 16 2012, 18:45:09 UTC
I didn't just like it. I loved it. ;) The way that their thoughts lead to different ways is kind of amazing...

Don't worry, you're not the only one to torture ducky in your fics... *guilty* >.>

Always my pleasure <3 lol I'm not clever because of that. No. And if they DID try, I would protect you! xD

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deadlyscarlet May 16 2012, 19:31:36 UTC
thank u ^-^

LOL well he is too adorable tats y i guess..but i wanna write something where he gets totally pampered from head to foot <3

aw i m so happy to hear that i hav got myself a protector YAY!!!

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bluelydays May 16 2012, 21:10:19 UTC
*flails* I love everything about this chapter! Its cute and sexy and sad and- and-... *flails again*
I am utterly in love with this fic. ^_^ I love your writing!
Hopefully Yuu and Kouyou will be able to control their tempers soon. I'm interested to see how this will all turn out. :3
Can't wait for the next update!

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deadlyscarlet May 16 2012, 21:20:54 UTC
thank u dear..i m so happy to see ur comment ^-^

i m glad u liked tis chapter..it was a bit hasty on my part and it gave me a headache when i formed the events for this..bt i m still happy with the positive responses i m getting..

tis is the first time i m exploring my writing skills and i feel so light headed when i hear u telling u love my writing..i will try to improve more ^^

yes i want them to do more interesting things LOL lets c how my mind will work..

i will try to update the next chapter soon ^^ thank u very much for reading dear <3 it means a lot

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my_turtle_pear May 17 2012, 10:13:20 UTC
Mah~ So happy to see a chapter up so soon!!! Want more already through~ Really interested to see how this goes, cause i don't see how Uru Kouyou can use Yuu...And Yuu...well he just give me the shivers~ in a good way of course~ You have for sure captured that egotistical Aoi that i love so much, but at the same time sweet but so dominant~ Love it!

Cant wait for the next one ne!!!

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deadlyscarlet May 17 2012, 13:43:19 UTC
Thanx for reading and commenting ^-^

Ah yes Kou was really desperate since the poor thing is just being used by everyone including Yuu whom he really likes a lot..cant blame him..

i m so happy u like Yuu..he is my bias..i love him too damn much tats y i m so careful when it comes to creating his character..

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