this is the end, beautiful friend (1/1)

Apr 11, 2015 23:14

jongin/jongdae → 1.3k words → pg-13 → kim jongin doesn't fear death. → zombie apocalypse!au → bc carly is an asshole!!!! highlight for warnings implied character death, badly written angst

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c: exo, s: jongin/jongdae, t: fanfic

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okay first of all exorgasm April 12 2015, 05:05:02 UTC
who gave you the right to hurt me like this??? and those last lines ha hA HAH i'm not crying, you're crying. put a gun against my head and kill me now jenna shoot me lIKE HOW YOU MADE JONGIN SHOOT JONGDAE.

other than my newly formed hatred towards you, this is nothing short of amazing! beautiful and it pulls on every vein on your heart that's keeping you alive!

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RE: okay first of all deadheartbeats April 12 2015, 05:15:02 UTC
THIS WAS ALL CARLY'S FAULT!!! SHE LEFT A PROMPT AND TOLD ME TO FUCK SHIT UP!!!!!!!

thank u son... ur sweet........ i hate u too.......

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cassie_789 April 12 2015, 05:24:34 UTC
h h h ho w wo ow od are y oy oo o u y ou doo this oto us im dy ing in side like the virus has INFECTED ME KILL ME NOW JENNA

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deadheartbeats April 12 2015, 05:45:44 UTC
I AM BUT A CHILD...... DONT DIE ON ME....

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OKAY SECOND OF ALL hentaekai April 12 2015, 05:56:19 UTC
i hope you're happy i made an lj just so i could SCREAM AT YOU

I REGRET EVERYTHING IR EGRET SENDING YOU THIS PROMPT AND LAUGHING ABOUT IT OK I TAKE IT ALL BACK except i don't rly because i live for tears and THIS WAS GREAT OK i'm just
how do i leave a constructive comment i don'T KNOW LET ME JUST
"jongin’s always thought if his blood doesn’t save the world, jongdae’s smile just might." YOU'RE THE WORST JENNA I LOVE IT BUT I HATE YOU

just....IT WAS TOO SHORT I NEEDED MORE EVERYTHING WENT TO SHIT TOO FAST HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME THEY WERE SO CUTE...I WASN'T READY FOR EVERYTHING TO BE DESTROYED SO QUICKLY...

but i am happy to take your character death virginity ok it was worth it and if it makes you feel better i teared up while reading this and I LOVE IT i'm gonna FORCE EVERYONE I KNOW TO READ IT i don't know what else to say I LOVE IT AND I HATE YOU THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AND KILLING ME

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RE: OKAY SECOND OF ALL deadheartbeats April 12 2015, 06:02:23 UTC
IM VERY HAPPY THX CARLY

GOOD GOOD FEEL REGRET!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!! IVE NEVER DONE ANGST B4 U!!!!!

hah haaahahaaaha im v proud of that line :'-) glad 2 see u suffer heathen

TBH I WAS WORRIED IT WAS TOO SHORT BUT IT ALSO JUST GOT OUT OF A HAND AT THE SAME TIME??? IDK HOW 2 LONG FIC OR SHORT FIC OK IM BUT A CHILD

YOU'RE WELCOME!!! MAYBE NOW YOULL THINK TWICE!!!!!

I LOVE U TOO!! LOVE U BITCH AND I AINT EVER GONNA STOP LOVIN U, BITCH!!!

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pinkaces April 13 2015, 09:40:10 UTC
I WENT FROM AH CHENKAI BABIES JONGDAE CALLING JONGIN TWINKLE TOES JONGIN'S OPTIMISM I LOVE!!!!

and then

no

no no no no nO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

>:(

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deadheartbeats April 13 2015, 12:59:10 UTC
are you proud of me mother i wrote my first angst/character death

are u proud

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deadheartbeats April 26 2015, 14:36:50 UTC
DONT LEAVE ME KIM FIFI... THIS IS CARLYS FAULT...... I DIDNT WANT TO KILL HIM

MENDS UR HEART GENTLY WITH NICE BANDAIDS PLS FORGIVE ME......

did i do... a good job at angst... i hear ur good at it....

i love u 2... we can be emo 2gether

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