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archaeologist_d November 13 2010, 19:49:07 UTC
This was lovely. I loved how it wasn't quite obvious at the beginning what was wrong, only that Bradley knew something was and the way Colin was acting, it was something big. I liked how they tried and didn't and danced around each other as the tension and misunderstandings built up. Well done.

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slowdead November 14 2010, 12:52:08 UTC
Thank you so much :) I'm very happy you enjoyed it ♥

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raramai November 13 2010, 21:13:16 UTC
Oh, this was so sweet! I love the atmosphere of the piece; it's hard to describe, but I was reading this while looking outside at a pale sunset, so if it's not too much of a stretch, I imagine Bradley staring at that kind of sunset, knowing that there's something important about it but not being able to pinpoint what exactly it is. And that, I think, is my favorite part about this piece - Bradley's feelings of being alone, an outsider, missing something that others have.

I did read your notes. I just have to say that I'm excited for more of these kinds of B/C fics. I'm not sure if it's a trope, but I saw a bodyswitching prompt on KMM and was all...WANT. So that is my suggestion for your tenth trope. :)

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slowdead November 17 2010, 09:41:32 UTC
Thank you so much! :) I'm very happy you enjoyed reading it ♥ Bradley and his feelings were very important in this fic so I'm glad they came across okay!

Bodyswitching! How could I forget that one?! :O thanks

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sweetestel November 13 2010, 21:27:00 UTC
I was looking for a fic to enlighten my mood and I wasn't disappointed! Well, okay, I sort of was as much anxious as Bradley was in the begining, but the happy end made it all! ;) I really like your take on the amnesia cliché! It's probably the most original amnesia fic I've read, with everything being from post-amnesia-Bradley's point of view. We don't even know exactly what has happened to him and there are a lot of blanks in the story that makes us empathise with Bradley who's dealing with his full-of-blanks memory. The tensions and romance were really well built up.
Thank you for sharing :)

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slowdead November 17 2010, 09:44:17 UTC
Thank you so much! :) I'm very happy you enjoyed it ♥

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significantowl November 13 2010, 22:54:06 UTC
I really enjoyed this! The tomato reveal was perfectly done and, like the whole fic, so wonderfully paced - made me all warm & achy in the best way :)

Also, oh, how I love cliche fics! *heartily approves of your project* Hope you don't mind if I friend to better keep an eye out?

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slowdead November 13 2010, 22:56:31 UTC
Oh I don't mind at all, please feel free to friend this journal! ♥

I'm very happy you enjoyed it ♥ and thanks so much for commenting!

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slowdead November 17 2010, 09:54:28 UTC
LOVE YOU TOO BB. AND I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE THE FIC ♥

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