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014 - TW: Displaced

Nov 02, 2006 23:11

Title: Displaced
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing/Characters: Gwen/Rhys, implied Gwen/Jack
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 1.03 to be safe, but no direct plot spoilers other than the implication of G/J to come.
Summary: Gwen doesn’t know how to feel when she comes home after a long night at Torchwood.
Notes: My first Torchwood fic! I'm REALLY enjoying this Dr ( Read more... )

torchwood, gwen/jack, gwen/rhys

Comments 17

tulzdavampslaya November 4 2006, 03:50:03 UTC

HAWT!

*ahem*

great story.

neonbliss November 4 2006, 04:14:53 UTC

Hee hee! Thanks! :)

ywii November 5 2006, 01:25:54 UTC

I really like this one! :D

neonbliss November 5 2006, 04:27:17 UTC

Thank you!

oltha_heri November 7 2006, 06:21:05 UTC

She can't help it that Jack just happens to be irresistible.
I really liked this, especially her remembering bits, they were entered really well.

neonbliss November 7 2006, 15:56:31 UTC

Umm, yeah... I love Rhys to bits, but when there's Sexy!Jack around, she can't be held responsible for her actions! :)

Thanks for the review!

indiefairy November 7 2006, 12:59:28 UTC

Very nice. Not a huge fan of Jack/Gwen, but I really liked this. Well Done.

neonbliss November 7 2006, 16:04:49 UTC

I'm pretty much always for the obvious 'ships that will probably never happen, but are so cute you just wanna pitch their cheeks. I'm glad you liked it, despite not liking G/J. :)

sarren November 12 2006, 16:01:42 UTC

This is cool :)

Just one little thing that jolted me out of the story...Gwen would dry her 'fringe' not her 'bangs'

neonbliss November 15 2006, 21:34:44 UTC

Thank you!

You know, I originally had written 'fringe' but then changed it at the last minute. :P I'll go change it back.