This depressed me to write. Enjoy.

Oct 26, 2004 01:48

TITLE: That Was A Minute Ago
AUTHOR: Indigo, aka indigoskynet
RATING: PG-13 to R for some yucky imagery.
FANDOM: Kim Possible [with a bunch of alterniverse cameos]
SUMMARY: Ron Stoppable's point of view on the dead earth situation, and his desperate reach for a way to stop it all before it stats.
DISCLAIMER:  Disney/ABC is the owner of Kim Possible.  This ( Read more... )

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paradisacorbasi October 26 2004, 06:38:40 UTC
The Moodulator episode broke my heart.

Kim with the love for Ron and poor Ron not knowing it was the device.

And Kim grabs him and kisses him and he valiantly tries to resist for one second, five, ten, and then he gives in and kisses her back.

And when the kiss breaks, poor Ron's mind is just GONE.

And I felt so bad for him when he found out it was just a computerized device making Kim love him.

*sniffle*

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alkam October 26 2004, 06:53:58 UTC
*sniffle*

Poor Ron!

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erinlin October 26 2004, 14:05:11 UTC
I laughed. And then I cried. Poor Ron! The ending's like a punch in the gut. I especally like the way you did the flashbacks.

*goes off to have a good cry*

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spatz October 27 2004, 03:25:05 UTC
*whimpers* Ow.

I don't know how you did it, but you did a fabulous job of setting Kim Possible in the apocalypse. The characters are all beautifully done, especially Ron, who made me cry because he shouldn't have to grow up like that. I can't decide which hurt worse: Kim Possible giving up, or Ron losing his joy.

I really liked the Shego bits, because I have a soft spot for the girl. The comic references were great; the Batman scene was hysterically funny for anyone who's a fan.

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paradisacorbasi October 27 2004, 03:29:52 UTC
Thank you.

I love Shego too. And the Batman thing just came to me while I was typing. I was like: okay, on Halloween the worlds merge and then everybody is all crammed on one earth, and how would Batman deal with Kim Possible? It was either mistake her for an alterniverse Barbara Gordon or equate her with Spoiler because of her age.

And hey, the story did end on an upbeat note -- Ron might be able to save the day with the Time Monkey, considering he has at least one genius with him, and Wade on this end along with Doc Possible, Jim and Tim and the former Dr. Drakken.

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spatz October 28 2004, 03:27:57 UTC
Yes, the ending was hopeful ;) But the journey to the ending was PAIN. The good storytelling kind, but nevertheless, anguish made an appearance.

Y'know, after I posted my review, I checked back on posts and realized that you also made me cry over Fairly Oddparents, which I don't even watch. I sincerely hope you write more Dead_Earth fic, because I'm having a blast reading it.

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paradisacorbasi April 27 2005, 10:41:40 UTC
I'll give it a go if anything else occurs.

Right now, though, I'm blissing that my Ship is Canon!

*g* Vootie!

So the Drama made Kim and Ron an item!

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