Comments | deaconfic: take a right at the light, keep goin' straight until night (SPN, adult)

deaconfic

take a right at the light, keep goin' straight until night (SPN, adult)

Jul 23, 2007 13:44

Sam/Dean, adult. Notes at the end.

( take a right at the light, keep goin' straight until night )

Comments 57

fromyourashes July 24 2007, 17:33:19 UTC

so. this is the second time i've wanted to say, "oh, fuck you," to someone in the good way. does that make sense at ALL? i just, first thoughts when i finished were, oh, fuck you, man, that fucking hurt so much.

but it was a good "fuck you." ok? seriously.

i had the thought once or twice to write something like this but no way, couldn't, hurt too much to think about it. i adore that you didn't let the reader in on the fact that sam didn't know right away.

and with the timeline thing, i figured, eh, close enough, it's only a few measly hours. it didn't detract from the beauty of the story.

you knocked this one out of the park, and shattered me. thank you.

cdeacon July 25 2007, 16:42:21 UTC

This comment keeps making me blush. It's a great compliment. Thank you!

fromyourashes July 25 2007, 20:57:25 UTC

*grins*

YAY!

thanatoseve July 25 2007, 07:20:58 UTC

This is how ahbl should have ended with Sam oblivious to the deal and Dean keeping it secret.
Added wincest would have been a REAL bonus.

I like the plot.

cdeacon July 25 2007, 16:40:58 UTC

Well, I loved the end of AHBL so much that I didn't even really want to mess with it, but eventually I gave it a shot. Heh. And thank you!

elz July 25 2007, 13:23:56 UTC

Owwwww. This is gorgeous.

cdeacon July 25 2007, 16:41:28 UTC

Aw, I love your icon.

And thank you very much. : )

lexii314 July 26 2007, 01:15:33 UTC

It's a great story and a fantastic idea.
They will all most likely make me cry.

cdeacon July 26 2007, 05:52:11 UTC

Aw, thank you. : )

rosekay July 26 2007, 03:21:02 UTC

WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME.

Seriously, I really love how quiet this is, so deceptively gentle until the very end. That last paragraph and bit of dialogue, chilling and heart breaking.

cdeacon July 26 2007, 05:55:05 UTC

I think it's because I'm an extremely angry person. Or so I've been told.

But really, thank you. I took forever writing this and I think it's mostly because I so much wanted to get the tone right. I wanted the gentleness to be a real thing and not just a fake-out, but I wanted the end to be increasingly creepy too. (I feel that sentence makes no sense, but it's 1 in the morning, so oh well.)