Comments | ddayspring: FIC: Into Darkness Peering, Chapter 3

ddayspring

FIC: Into Darkness Peering, Chapter 3

Dec 29, 2003 22:19

A very difficult chapter to write.

( Chapter Three )

Comments 6

mecurtin December 29 2003, 19:59:14 UTC

Harrowing and effective. Dare I say the maggots are a nice touch?

Not exactly -- but a realistic and appropriate touch. Good job.

darthhellokitty December 29 2003, 22:02:37 UTC

Oh my... disturbing, good. Must have more.

digitalwave December 29 2003, 22:04:32 UTC

Wow Day, this is amazing. It hurts like the dickins but it is amazing. Mac and Methos have such a long journey to make to come back from this.

Kill 'em all! anonymous January 9 2004, 13:02:43 UTC

I can't wait for more, Day! This was excellent. And I too admit to liking "this" Richie...he does what he's told in dangerous situations (i.e., trusting the expert, and not putting them in more danger by going off on his own ) and he's supportive of his "Dad". I also have a Methos h/c kink, so I hope Duncan gets alot of practice in comforting the Old Man ...he really deserves it this time.

And a "savage" Duncan...who wants to kill Watchers and mortals? With no brooding or angst about it? Lovin' it! I was ready to eviscerate that monk myself after they found "the beast". Duncan must be mourning the loss of Sean now, 'cause where are they gonna find a psychiatrist to help?

MORE SOON PLEASE!

anonymous January 24 2004, 09:47:50 UTC

Absolutely Fantastic! Can't wait for the rest of this epic. You really know how to write angst/hurt/comfort!