Kate leans over, still swiftly pumping Steph from behind, she pulls her up slightly off the cushion with the hand fisted in her hair. “Do you want it, now
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Kate disengages, earning a long, drawn-out moan from the blonde as she pulls her cock out of Steph’s abused cunt. A whirlwind of bewildering moments later and their positions are changed. Kate’s lounging on the couch, nude, legs spread, cock jutting out proudly. Steph’s straddled in her lap, thighs carefully on either side of Kate’s, though they aren’t fucking right now
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Re: Wounds (4/4)batmasterJune 8 2012, 03:06:09 UTC
The tears that won’t fall are somehow worse than the pain spiking her broken ribs, searing her surgically-salvaged gut. She hears Kate, and the other, a voice she’s heard before. It’s someone she knows. The passionate screams have stopped, but that’s why this hurts, so much more. Low voices whispering on morning’s first dew. She can’t make out what they’re saying. Though it’s irrelevant. It’s their tone that cements the truth
( ... )
Well you should definitely do plotty more often! Not that your smut isn't as equally impressive but when you've got your plot brewing you just expand the fill into something sublime.
Nope, I'm serious. I mean I knew you were good but what you've shown with Wounds is quite the improvement. Or maybe I wasn't paying enough attention to the overall style in your older stories.
Did you enjoy the other fills I did for you a couple days ago?
Re: Wounds (4/4)batmasterJune 8 2012, 04:01:30 UTC
thanks! I dunno, the scene just jumped out at me from the prompts. then later, the plot insisted itself in there, and that was that. glad you liked it!
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Bat...just...I can't...you are definitely a master at writing.
I could go on and on about how amazing this is but I'll end it with another movie quote.
We're not worthy!
We're not worthy!
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I must write more requests of yours.
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now I just think you're trying to flatter me. are you trying to get on my good side? j/k, ;)
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Did you enjoy the other fills I did for you a couple days ago?
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