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Fill! jayeinacross February 11 2012, 11:13:51 UTC
Something’s not quite right.

Tim’s not quite right.

He keeps trying to tell himself that it’s nothing. But it’s not. Something is wrong.

The other day when Bart was running around and generally being irritating, he snapped at him, “Stop it, Imp!”

Bart took a second to tilt his head and ask why Tim had called him that before forgetting about it and speeding off again.

Tim could never think of an answer to his question.

Then another time, he glances at Cassie and notices how gorgeous she is even when she’s in the middle of the fight, and is immediately overwhelmed by crippling guilt, because how could he do that to Kon?He shouldn’t be feeling guilty for a simple observation ( ... )

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Re: Fill! salmon_pink February 12 2012, 00:35:43 UTC
Oh God, so painful. Excuse me while I curl up in a ball of emotions! DX
This was so perfect - there's such an ache there, so vivid, for everything lost, things that may never be found. Amazing fill!

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Re: Fill! jayeinacross February 12 2012, 07:49:47 UTC
Thank you so much!

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Re: Fill!-- op jayeinacross February 12 2012, 05:34:36 UTC
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
This is completely what I had in mind when I thought of this prompt!
(also I'm a tim/kon shipper/OMG I LOVE THEIR FRIENDSHIP it was just so wonderufl...)

and excuse me but it was sad but not overwhelmingly and it was wonderful, thank you!

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Re: Fill!-- op jayeinacross February 12 2012, 07:48:27 UTC
You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it!

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Re: Fill! mithen February 12 2012, 13:09:59 UTC
With every name, Tim gets lonelier and lonelier.

This was just perfect. I love stories where pasts bleed through, and I love what you did with this one, all the fragments of past lives haunting him. (Also, Miguel making eggplant sandwiches--I approve). Beautiful and sad.

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Re: Fill! jayeinacross February 12 2012, 20:38:54 UTC
Thank you!

Ahh, Miguel. I thought, what's going to remind him of Steph? Eggplant. How do I incorporate eggplant into this story? Someone makes him an eggplant sandwich. Who would do that?
Well, there was really only one answer.

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Re: Fill! eternal_moonie July 22 2012, 12:49:48 UTC
Absolutely AWESOME!!!!

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