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[dclore]

As I mentioned in an earlier post I need help deciding which song to continue writing. Both are nice so I can't decide.

This is the link to the first verse of one of the songs: http://www.savefile.com/files/9239738

And this is the lin to the second: http://www.savefile.com/files/9205069

Let me know what you all think. I think the new microphone I have

Comments

[violetcreme]

Wow, is that your new mic ? it's fab ! Sounds really professional. Better than the other one by a mile.

I much prefer song 2, it's got more hook to it the first one is nice but perhaps a little bland.

[dclore]

At the moment I'm thinking of the second one as well.

[dclore]

Well it is a professional studio microphone!

[violetcreme]

What a disturbing icon, what the hell is that ?!? LOL

[violetcreme]

Oh I forgot, the bit between 0.28 and 0.33 is PURE Elton John.

[dclore]

In which song?

[violetcreme]

Song 2, Maybe.

Have it on repeat, I love it. Is there more ?

[dclore]

Not of that one. I have more of the first one but depending on the out come of this post I'll probably canabalise it for ideas and transplant them into the second song.

[violetcreme]

Now you've got your snazzy new mic, can I have a proper copy of 'Empty Eyes' ?

[dclore]

Yes if I can find the lyrics for the bridge. If I can't I'll do you a short version.

[ikkleosu]

Yup I concur, song 2 it is. Like the hook, like the lyrics think they are more commercial.

I was going to say, so when did you get Elton in to record your demos. Heavens man, you are his voice double. Surely there's some money in that...someplace?

[dclore]

Thanks!

I don't know about doubling for Elton, it usually requires looking like him. If you can sing like him as well it's just a bonus.

I think that song 2 might have to be the one.