The Gods Who Rose from the East

[dbskficvault]

Title: The Gods Who Rose from the East
Author: joms_hp aka Lady Jam co-authored by zaetchleo
Genre: Slight AU, Supernatural, Drama, Suspense, Mythological
Rating: PG
Length: 3/?
Word Count: 3396 words
Pairing: Yunjae, YooSuMin, and various pairings
Warning: Yaoi

Disclaimer: If we do own them then all of our fangirl fantasies would come true. Sadly the

Comments

[dbskficvault]

Save spot for zaetchleo!

[zaetchleo]

unnie I love you!!! hehehe came in late cuz of an impromtu reunion with my elem friends kekeke

[joms_hp]

That's ok. I'll always save a spot for my fave dongsaeng.

[positive_news22]

once again, thank-you for the chapter! Very enlightening as always and well planned ^^ can't wait for more!!

[joms_hp]

Thank you again for the comment. I had a hard time composing this chapter because the draft I have for this is short and I am sort of winging this one not to mention this is like a catalyst sort of chapter. Anway, I am glad it turned out great in the end.

[positive_news22]

You're welcome! Well for just winging it you sure did a good job ^^ and yup it did turn out great! ^0^

!!!

[b0ojae]

i applaud the effort and knowledge you put into this tale, not to mention several cultural values that these asian countries hold.. looking forward for the next chappie ! *and yunjae moments ehehe*

Re: !!!

[joms_hp]

I'll put more Yunjae moment on the next don't worry. I'll try my best to update again soon. Thank you again!

[feyla]

I'm enjoying reading this, but I do have one comment- there are waaaay too many footnotes. I feel like I'm reading a history essay. I think you need to find a good compromise between them. Some information isn't needed. You could just say camera, really nice camera, something like that. Some of it, like the Three Kingdoms, maybe you should explain before the chapter starts. It interrupts the flow really to have so many foreign concepts or ideas. I know they're necessary, but it's a problem just about any author has and you have to find a way to introduce them in without all these footnotes. Someone doesn't know what something is, so someone else explains it, a little history lesson before the chapters, just leaving some of it out.

and on a personal comment, I was reading your description of the Three Kingdoms, and that made it sound like they immediately switched to North/South. Paekche was conquered by Silla, there was a period of Unified Silla, the Koryo breaks off and eventually unites everyone again, which is the way it stayed

[joms_hp]

No, it's ok I don't mind and I am not offended and I appreciate your constructive criticism. Anyway, the foot note would be lessen in the succeding chapters because I have almost explained what needs to be explained in this chapter so it won't be this lengthy anymore or even none in some chapters. Thank you for the comment. :D

[alwyz_member_me]

=3 New reader. Ahs I've always been interested in classical myths like these. Didn't help that I read Fushigi Yuugi, and I'm really into Greek/Roman mythology.

I don't know what else to say because I don't know much information, but I can't wait until the next chapter.

[joms_hp]

Thank you for the comment. I am glad you like it. I'll try update soon. ^_^