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kurogoma March 24 2009, 02:48:37 UTC
i truely enjoyed reading this. i am such a sucker for historical AUs, and i loved the ancient rome!homin that you wrote before.

your characterization of jaejoong as tough, cold yet righteous and passionate was very nice. but the yoomin truely made me sad.
i wished changmin had brought him back with him to sparta.....

good job! :D

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dreaminthepast March 24 2009, 16:22:13 UTC
I'm a sucker for historical au's too. The classicist in me squees at the thought of writing them.

Writing the Yoomin was really hard, to have those tragic characters and have them be strong but week to. There's actually going to be an entire second half because I didn't get to finish writing it all before the deadline, so perhaps Changmin will still get his chance to bring Yoochun back.

Thank you so much.

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kurogoma March 31 2009, 01:20:34 UTC
i am looking forward to the second half then....sad!yoomin needs as much a happy-ever-after as possible. :D

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imie_schweetzel March 24 2009, 07:33:34 UTC
a satisfying read indeed. i cant help but drool at the imagery of our favorite boys as ancient warriors. so very hot. *approving nods* :D

the broken!yoomin is sad - but since im more a fan of yoosu/minsu, this settles fine with me *cruel laugh* xD and yeay to yunjae! jae is so very cynical in here ne..hihi..but i like how yunho manages to pry his cold exterior n finds a lover there. their smexing is made of pure, broiled hotness. haha. :p

this is ♥♥♥

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dreaminthepast March 24 2009, 16:26:04 UTC
All those big swords and nudity *_*

Lol, aw. It was very hard to write in parts, my heart hurt a little.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you! ♥♥

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cherjae March 27 2009, 10:19:42 UTC
ROMAN AU :D
its enjoyable indeed.. even though yoomin didnt have a happy ending. hahaha
but really the yunjae made me smile.. for some odd reason.... the cynical sarcastic jae is love to read :)

<3

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dreaminthepast March 28 2009, 05:45:55 UTC
:) Thank you!
I hope to make up for the sad YooMin in the continuation.
YooMin shouldn't be left being sad.

<3

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music3chick April 12 2009, 18:25:24 UTC

What he misses are the tears as they fall from Yoochun’s cheeks, his war; never fought, may be over but the wounds are only starting to be stitched back together.

Ah, so sad.

I don't usually read war-related fics, but this was amazing. I loved it.

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dreaminthepast April 18 2009, 00:48:52 UTC
Thank you so much <3

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