springtides: the gravity of our hearts.

Mar 30, 2009 17:26

Title: the gravity of our hearts.
Author: spinintriangles -> springtides
Pairings: Yunho/Jaejoong, Yoochun/Junsu
Rating: PG13
Summary: From the very beginning, he’s a boy with a heart made of fire, an accident waiting to happen. His eyes say: give me your heart and I will burn it for you.
Disclaimer: DBSK are their own people under the management of SM Entertainment. The ( Read more... )

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blurmeese April 4 2009, 08:34:55 UTC
Reading this was like reading lines of poetry strung together but I think I've told you that enough in your past works no hurt from one more time, right?The way you set scenes and put words to places, sentences to feelings and thoughts and everything, right from the re-meeting up to the very end at the beach, everything just sort of...flows into the next part. And Jaejoong meeting the rest of them was exceptionally well done too, you managed to incorporate the remaining 3 members into this without stealing the spotlight from Jaejoong/Yunho while still being able to shed enough light on them ( ... )

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coldhoney April 4 2009, 19:32:52 UTC
I don't think I can make a decent comment but,
I loved your fic <3 I loved the growth in relationship
between YunHo and JaeJoong, it grew so smoothly~

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graveyardgrin May 16 2009, 03:54:57 UTC
homygosh. this is really really lovely~ I especially liked the part with Jaejoong and Sooyoung (and Heechul ♥) :] memming this to read again!

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gdtle1 October 22 2009, 11:00:50 UTC
This was amazing, I'm all incoherent now. The little, subtle deeds Yunho always did for Jaejoong made me smile. I freaking loved your development of their relationship, just brilliantly written <3

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be_ddelusionall March 15 2010, 08:39:49 UTC
this was very good

i am totally in love with fire, so adding fire and my DBSK boys just made it all that sweeter.

*burns you with love* ♥

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be_ddelusionall March 15 2010, 08:40:29 UTC
and on yeah ... 13 yr old Heechul with the fingernail polish is just pure pure win.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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