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Leftover Ghosts (Open Challege; Flashfic Challenge 7: (Becoming) Real)

Aug 17, 2008 13:52

Title: Leftover Ghosts
Author: thevignette /inlightof
Word count: 1017
Concrit?: Sure
Pairing: Yoochun/Changmin

( Changmin looks away, knowing sorrow spreads as fast as fire. )

c: open challenge, c: (becoming) real, a: thevignette

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thevignette August 17 2008, 07:30:56 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you thought so :D

sy_ya August 17 2008, 07:31:44 UTC

this is not even my favorite pair but i honestly enjoyed reading it as if it's my otp you wrote about. i love your description of changmin's longing & yoochun's absence in the first 6 paragraphs (?).

and the last line is perfect. very simple but meaningful.

thevignette August 17 2008, 07:38:23 UTC

Thank you :D I'm glad you like the last line. I was thinking about how to end it, and thought it seemed fitting.

zhyune August 17 2008, 11:42:25 UTC

Ouch X| That felt like a million daggers through my yoomin otp heart D:

Beautifully written :D<33~~

thevignette August 17 2008, 12:44:14 UTC

Yoomin is ♥ I feel as though I should write something happier to make it up to my otp :D thank you

sleepish August 17 2008, 11:51:51 UTC

ouch, hurty good. i love the last few lines fiercely. ♥

thevignette August 17 2008, 12:45:00 UTC

♥♥♥ thank you for the lovely comment.

quiet_heartache August 17 2008, 16:09:24 UTC

'Leaves him with bed sheets stained with love, coffee rings on paper, the aftertaste of their first kiss- Changmin stares hard at the telephone, waiting for it to ring, waiting for the strength to dial.' - <3

but, like, OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
oh broken yoomin, thou hurtest me soooooooo

thevignette August 18 2008, 10:03:45 UTC

Thank you :D I really ought to be nicer to my otp instead of breaking them up all the time.