the emperor's new clothes (drabble challenge 14 : necessity)

May 19, 2008 15:35

Title: The Emperor's New Clothes
Author: aswindblows
Word count: 150
Concrit?: If you please.
Pairing: JaeMin
Summary: This is something they need to do, once in a while.
Author's Notes: Hi, my first time writing something so short (with a self imposed limit of 100/150/200 words)! Meant to be a birthday fic for ilovehugs♥ I'm not sure this is quite what you wanted... ( Read more... )

a: aswindblows, c: necessity

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onew May 19 2008, 11:44:19 UTC

ma-chan, you're back! i-- i'm so happy! :D *bounces*

hmmmm. short but really lovely. i love the repetition of 'teeth' and the last line is a winner. write more, ma-chan? :D

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thevignette May 19 2008, 12:50:22 UTC
I really enjoyed this one :D Especially the last line

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thevirginia May 19 2008, 13:13:37 UTC
really interesting :) i loved the last line as well.

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quiet_heartache May 19 2008, 21:11:02 UTC
i dont think anything is too much for jaemin, joongie really needs to let go and learn that lol!
nice, sankyuu

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baegopa May 21 2008, 13:56:31 UTC
That has to be the best bday present ;o;

I like how you wrote min, and babe nothing can go wrong when you write jaemin ♥ Teeth, lol. Min has nice teeth.

I LOVE YOU, THANKS FOR WRITING THIS FOR ME ;~~~;

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