On a sudden occurrence, on a sunny day (response to drabble challenge 13: light)

[onew]

Title: On a sudden occurrence, on a sunny day
Author: Reeza (aoireeza)
Word count: 200 words
Concrit?: sure. :D
Pairing: JaeChun
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Never let something stay lighted for so long. The flame might just spread... like wildfire. (for dbsk_flashfic @ drabble challenge 13: light; also for pach_unni and ianinna)

Comments

[halfkissed]

spottageeeee (NOT like cheese). heeeee

[halfkissed]

sometimes my brain gets stuck somewhere when i read.

*bangs head on wall*

it was beautiful and beautifully written. ♥ i'm not quite sure if i understand it completely tho (so not your fault i swear). right now i dunno if i should feel sad after reading that, or not. aaaaaaaaa i need to re-wire.

*bangs head some more*

[onew]

you should feel sad because hmmm... it is

[vicvickyrox]

SHORT,SWEET,BEAUTIFUL<3
*does not like the smoking part though D:*

<3

[onew]

i don't like them smoking, too, but it... kinda works for jaechun. ^^; and thank you very much! :D

[wmelon_kaiye]

o__o

That was actually really good. The idea in itself is pretty darn awesome. <3

[onew]

thank you so much! :D

[yumeyana]

chunjae and fire. really, sis.
now, write me something!!

[onew]

TMTH? xD
YEAHYEAH.

[applesu]

i really like this! (: i love the smoke/fire/light allusions. really fits with jaechun :D

He puts out the fire, kisses you just before you can get used to breathing.

♥

[onew]

thank you so much! :D
♥