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Away (Flashfic Challenge 251: Last Minute)

Dec 24, 2015 04:47

Title: Away
Author: twhitesakura
Word-count: 500
Rating: PG
Concrit? Yes
Summary: AU. Yunho learns that second chances don't come last minute.

( Away )

c: last minute, a: twhitesakura

Comments 6

tahoeturquoise December 24 2015, 15:09:19 UTC

(winces) Ouch!

twhitesakura December 30 2015, 07:19:39 UTC

*offers you a hug?* Thanks for reading. =)

xzeffirx December 25 2015, 18:31:41 UTC

Ups.. Yunho should not behaves so smugly.. A little bit of begging might have helped.. And Jae probably misunderstood - surely Yunho meant that ring for him, so why give it to Yunho while throwing him out.. he would not need it without Jae

twhitesakura December 30 2015, 07:20:22 UTC

Yes, always sad when things don't work out because of a miscommunication.

keiko_kirin December 25 2015, 21:35:17 UTC

OMG, I LOVE this! The atmosphere is so rich, the feeling of their past relationship so heavy on them both. Gorgeous! ♥ ♥ ♥

twhitesakura December 30 2015, 07:20:47 UTC

Yay! So glad you like it. <3