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Enough (Flashfic Challenge 246: Sweat)

Oct 03, 2015 02:20

Title: Enough
Author: twhitesakura
Word-count: 257
Rating: G
Concrit? Yes
Summary: AU. In the army, Jaejoong performs at a music festival and meets Yunho, an old flame.

( Enough )

c: sweat, a: twhitesakura

Comments 6

pichiruchi October 4 2015, 01:32:40 UTC

Wae :(( this is sad
I loved it still
Just... you just turned a happy happening into something bittersweet :(

twhitesakura October 14 2015, 04:20:43 UTC

It is a little bittersweet, but I guess it depends on if you think they will text or meet each other again and if you want them to. Thanks so much for reading! <3

keiko_kirin October 11 2015, 04:48:04 UTC

Ah, I love this~ so sweet and poignant. ♥

twhitesakura October 14 2015, 04:21:43 UTC

Thanks! Real events were a big help. =)

chloe1910 October 13 2015, 05:09:08 UTC

Like what I said before. this is so realistically and well written. I'm just so happy that they at least talked and interacted with each other's family members at the GFF celebration.

twhitesakura October 14 2015, 04:23:16 UTC

That's what I feel also. It's been so long that of course their relationship has changed, but as long as they view it positively I am glad.