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Pickup (Flashfic Challenge 236: Downtown)

Apr 06, 2015 01:05

Title: Pickup
Author: twhitesakura
Wordcount: 525
Rating: PG
Concrit? Yes
Summary: AU. Detective Yunho tries to pick up the bartender.

( Pickup )

c: downtown, a: twhitesakura

Comments 6

chloe1910 April 6 2015, 11:12:00 UTC

aaawww, Yunho is sure a lucky fella.. I'm assuming Jay here = Jaejoong?

twhitesakura April 14 2015, 22:43:41 UTC

Thank you. And yes, Jay is Jaejoong. ^_~

xzeffirx April 7 2015, 20:52:03 UTC

so, our boy had much more in his heart for the fellow hard-working guy than to Yunho in diamonds :) Good choice! And yes, Yunho is very lucky ;)

twhitesakura April 14 2015, 22:44:05 UTC

I think so, too. Thanks!

keiko_kirin April 13 2015, 13:57:47 UTC

♥ ^____^ picturing Yunho as the gumshoe and Changmin as the playboy. Awwww! :D & I love the bartender.^^

twhitesakura April 14 2015, 22:44:35 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked their AU characters. =)