Look me in the eyes (fic exchange: for dentedsky)

[kiccy]

Title: Look me in the eyes
Author: kiccy
Recipient: dentedsky
Word count: 2,273 words
Characters: Changmin, Yunho, and Jaejoong also appears
Rating: PG-13

Author's Notes:
So, this is for dentedsky. Merry (belated) Christmas, dear! (:
I'm actually a bit afraid right now, after seeing others posting great and amazing stories and I have only this. I'm afraid you won't like it. Uh,

Comments

[samikitty]

awww~~~ i like how jaejoong knows everything about changmin too... with just a glance. *^_^*

[kiccy]

Maybe it's only me, but I really see him as someone who knows a lot about others even without actually talking to them. (:
Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. ^-^

[dentedsky]

Merry Christmas! I forgot this was an xmas exchange *facepalm* and please please please don't worry about things, I was worried myself cos everyone wrote 2k+ fics and mine wasn't even 700 words =/ But at the end of the day this is for fun; I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it! ^^

This was really sweet, and an interesting look into their lives when they were five - of course I don't know for sure, but I think they must have been just like this. I mean, leader looking after the magnae, making sure he's alright, bless. =')

when he thought about him and Changmin being in a more serious relationship, it didn’t freak him out as much as he thought it would.

aw =') this is my favourite line, not just cos it was sweet and hinted at more but also because I think it's very realistic. I know of a situation where one friend was in love with another friend and that friend was shocked but decided to consider it. I reckon it suits homin well.

I love my gifty, thank you so much! =3

[kiccy]

Wow, I feel so relieved right now. You can't believe how worried I was, but I'm so happy that you liked it in the end. ^-^
I think you like this better than I do. And if I think about the fact that at first it was barely longer than 1,000 words and it had almost nothing but dialogues... I really shouldn't leave everything for the last minutes. ^^"

Ahw, and that wasn't even a line I thought about a lot or something. Such a simple one and you like that one the best, I'm sooo happy. ^-^

And I love you for loving this... uhm, story? Thank YOU for telling me your opinion, and for reading, and for not hating it. :D
Merry Christmas once more. ♥

(It's okay, I know LJ is such an idiot sometimes. ^^")

[keiko_kirin]

Very sweet! Awwww!

[kiccy]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. ^-^

[kiccy]

Thank you so much~ ♥

[coychick]

Aaawwwww. The last line turned me into a complete pile of mush. Damn you sweet Jung. No wonder Minnie is in love with you! ;))

Loved it!! ;)

XOXO.
D

[kiccy]

Ahw, hello and thank you for your comment, it means a lot to me you can't even imagine. I'm always glad when someone likes what I write and it's the nicest thing that you even wrote a comment~ ^-^
Thank you for reading and commenting. ♥