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Shared Melody (Fic Exchange: for twhitesakura)

Jan 08, 2012 19:02

Title: Shared Melody
Author: dentedsky
Recipient: twhitesakura
Word count: 685
Characters: Yunho, Changmin, Jaejoong
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: Optional details included: Living habits of Yunho and Changmin who share a dorm and Jaejoong teaching Changmin to cook.

( he thinks about all the little things he should have done differently )

c: staring at the sun, a: dentedsky, c: instrumental, c: fic exchange, c: if

Comments 48

isaofdoom January 8 2012, 14:52:56 UTC

i just want to give them. a thousand hugs. ; A ;♥ i do imagine that this is their silent communication that they're always bragging about~ loved it, as usual. \o/

dentedsky January 8 2012, 14:54:41 UTC

Thank you honey bunny! =*

changmin_amour January 8 2012, 15:16:23 UTC

loved this.. nice to see the bromance! and how the not-so-perfect can become perfect, if you give it the chance.
thank you for this!

dentedsky January 8 2012, 15:27:57 UTC

Thank you for reading! =3

twhitesakura January 8 2012, 16:06:01 UTC

Uh. Tremendous. And you threw in those little things about Jaejoong too! Be still my biased heart! I love that line about Yunho being compared to the sun and Jaejoong being the dark spots afterwards. I love how Yunho and Changmin aren't perfect (because they've admitted in real life before that they really are like opposites) but how much things work between them anyway, and how they accept each others' foibles (despite Changmin's grumbling). It's so like Changmin to keep thinking things need to improve, to be refined, but I think they're perfect the way they are in this story. Thank you for such a marvelous gift! *holds back impulse to ajfkjeiraihrerh*

dentedsky January 9 2012, 03:11:47 UTC

Aw =) I like to think they're a perfect duet but we also know that they're always striving for refinement and perfection, especially since they were so melodious when they had five members. In the wake of that perhaps they feel they need to connect again, in a different way.

Or something like that lol!

Thanks for your review and I'm glad you liked it =D

snow_meow January 8 2012, 16:12:26 UTC

I like the way you told the story.

They are not perfect yet as a duo but they are getting there to do what needs to be done.

dentedsky January 9 2012, 02:06:41 UTC

Yes! That's exactly the essence of the fic, I feel. Thank you =D

xxfergiexx January 8 2012, 19:33:51 UTC

He’s aware that they had slept there together with Yunho’s head pillowed in Changmin’s lap.

It’s the intimate moments between men; secrets kept in mental shoe boxes and hidden away from seeking eyes.

oh this part is lovely! Let's put aside how much I love that Yunho napped with his head on Min's lap, I really do wonder how many of those 'shoe box' moments exist between them.

Bet they go home and cuddle. LOL!

Love this fic, bb! A cute, endearing little snapshot of their daily life! That best part is they admit that they communicate just by looking at each other. Such perfect, beautiful bromance!!! <3

dentedsky January 9 2012, 03:13:31 UTC

Of course~ we know they 'embrace' at home lol! I'm re-translating that into 'cuddle' *nods*

Thank you honey funny bunny! =3