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Hold Me Tight (Flashfic Challenge 49: Darkness)

Jun 20, 2010 11:29

Title: Hold Me Tight
Author: underthepines
Word Count: 387
Concrit?: Yes, please
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin
Rating: pg13 (with stated-but-not-described sex)
Summary: Jaejoong means many things to Changmin.
A/N: Worst. Title. Ever. Apologies for that :/

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Comments 2

keiko_kirin June 21 2010, 09:22:32 UTC

Oooo! JaeMin is such an interesting dynamic, and you've really captured that here. I love that Changmin doesn't want to admit to his insecurities, yet knows exactly where to go to have them smoothed away.

I loved this:
and he forgets what Jaejoong was yesterday and what he'll mean in the morning and what he'll have to be tomorrow night.

I think this fits well with the prompt.

underthepines June 21 2010, 13:38:48 UTC

Yes, JaeMin is fascinating, which is why I ended up writing them here even though they're not necessarily my favorite^^ I feel like Changmin has a lot of insecurities he rarely/never lets on to and he knows it, but figures he can't show them considering how confident and comfortable his hyungs always appear.
Thanks for reading and commenting!