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INCOMPLETE-MEANT FOR FIVE (DRABBLE CHALLENGE 94: INSTRUMENTAL)

Jun 17, 2010 22:47

Title: incomplete-meant for five
Authorthetoastbox
Word count: 100
Concrit: definitely ^^
Rating: PG

( and he is waiting (forever waiting) )

c: instrumental, a: thetoastbox

Comments 10

only4dbsk June 17 2010, 15:03:33 UTC

aww. ;_;
JAE
love this ♥

thetoastbox June 18 2010, 06:10:47 UTC

jae ):
thank you for reading and i'm glad that you love it! ♥

red_planet31 June 17 2010, 16:01:00 UTC

*heart breaks* Jaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee♥
Darn, you made me tear up. :]

thetoastbox June 18 2010, 06:16:18 UTC

awww, *offers you scotch-tape to fix your heart* :3
thank you for reading!

underthepines June 18 2010, 04:27:53 UTC

This is really pretty^^ Sad, but pretty. It does a fantastic job conveying the emptiness, the incompleteness of everything now through the notion of their five voices belonging together.

thetoastbox June 18 2010, 06:22:42 UTC

Yup, that was what i wanted to convey to the readers!
Thank you for reading! ♥

keiko_kirin June 21 2010, 09:25:00 UTC

;_; Lovely but heartbreaking!

thetoastbox June 21 2010, 15:54:13 UTC

Thank you!
Sometimes it really hurts doesn't it? When I listen to JYJ's new songs, I would sometimes expect Yunho's and Changmin's voice to pop out suddenly ;~; i miss dongbangshinki.

in_hyeong December 6 2010, 15:01:09 UTC

THIS IS PRETTY. WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT GIRL! Nothing to be embarrassed about!! >8D

I actually thought you wrote this after knowing about jaebb's Nine, turns out o_o LONG BEFORE THAT.

♥ Bittersweet and that's how Jae is ^^

thetoastbox December 6 2010, 15:08:25 UTC

Thank you ♥. I AM STILL EMBARRASSED BECAUSE YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER ♥ /hides