Born With It (Drabble Challenge 92: Makeup)

Jun 02, 2010 22:02

Title: Born With It
Author: Rana Eros
Word Count: 100
Concrit?: Sure, though I have no plans to change this one.
Summary: Changmin decides to put beauty in the eye of the beholder.
Author's Notes: Speed-betaed by Eliza. Inspired by the hotness of Yunho's mole.

Born With It )

c: makeup, a: rana eros

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am3thyst June 3 2010, 05:37:50 UTC
Awesome! I love how 100 words can have so much meaning. =D And yes, Yunho's mole is too sexy to be covered up like that.

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ranalore October 26 2010, 05:15:02 UTC
Thank you (and sorry for the lateness of this reply)! The sexiness of the mole compelled me. *G*

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only4dbsk June 3 2010, 13:55:56 UTC
OMG I LOVED THIS!
"feeling human"....^_^
AWESOMEEE bb ^^

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ranalore October 26 2010, 05:17:06 UTC
Hee! I'm so glad you liked it. Sorry I'm so late in expressing my thanks!

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keiko_kirin June 3 2010, 20:54:40 UTC
♥ OMG, *yes*. Yunho's mole and Changmin's determination. You know I love this!!!

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ranalore October 26 2010, 05:17:40 UTC
It's kind of a lethal combination of hot, innit? *G* Thanks!

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twhitesakura June 6 2010, 06:12:01 UTC
This was absolutely gorgeous! I wish I could encapsulate so much with such simple dialogue and few words.

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ranalore October 26 2010, 05:18:48 UTC
Thank you so much! Sorry it's taken me so long to reply to such a compliment.

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underthepines June 9 2010, 23:47:29 UTC
This was gorgeous. I love the way Changmin is just fed up with it; it seems to symbolize his frustration with the lack of allowance for humanity in their world and that is a very, very powerful emotion captured perfectly in just a few snippets of dialogue.
Plus, Yunho's mole (and scars, and general non-perfectness) is in fact extraordinarily hot^^

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ranalore October 26 2010, 05:34:33 UTC
Sorry for the lateness of my reply, though I always flail a little in the face of detailed feedback. Thank you! I am so glad you picked up on so much of what I was trying to convey.

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