please stay (drabble challenge 86: allergic reaction)

Apr 08, 2010 23:57

please stay
by: sarangmode
100 words
concrit, please.

jaejoong + changmin
pg-13
in jaejoong's pov

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c: allergic reaction, a: sarangmode

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obsidianinks April 11 2010, 06:11:02 UTC
lol peanut oil and cranberry juice sounds... nasty. did jae make changmin sick intentionally? im not very sure what the peanut oil does..

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sarangmode April 11 2010, 06:29:39 UTC
yes, it does sound nasty doesn't it? but it wasn't too much. just a few drops :)

i thought it would have been obvious with the prompt: 'allergic reaction' but i guess i didn't explain it very well. lol. changmin's allergic to peanuts in this one. jaejoong makes him sick so jaejoong can keep him a bit longer ;)

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wordlesslove April 12 2010, 02:48:59 UTC
morbid love is scary~

but you did it so well, and i love it!!
this is dark, but very enticing.

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sarangmode April 12 2010, 05:53:40 UTC
thank you :)

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samikitty April 13 2010, 08:44:34 UTC
ah... creepy!jaejoong... O_o all shivery~~ but somehow... i still think jaejoong is a bit endearing here... though, you know... as deadly as peanut allergies are... this is probably way more morbid than i originally thought. ^^;;;;

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keiko_kirin April 19 2010, 01:36:28 UTC
I like plotting!Jaejoong who's maybe a little evil... ♥ I just hope Changmin's allergy is very mild... ^____^

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