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Contrast (Drabble Challenge 79: dark rooms )

Jan 25, 2010 01:51

Title: Contrast
Author: zhi_er
Word count: 200
Concrit: Sure
Pairing: Yunjae
Rating: PG-13 for sexual implications
Author's Notes: Not too happy with this, but I really need to get some sleep T___T.

( In the bright rooms, they make sure to not see each other )

c: dark rooms, a: zhi_er

Comments 4

keiko_kirin January 26 2010, 03:37:25 UTC

Really lovely! ♥ I like how you've used the idea of contrasts, not just in light but in their physicality with each other and their interactions.

zhi_er January 30 2010, 18:27:17 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad that you caught the idea. ^^

mubblebizh January 27 2010, 12:18:42 UTC

beautiful!

zhi_er January 30 2010, 18:27:39 UTC

Thanks for reading!