Shells (Drabble challenge special edition: Memory's telephoto lens)

[keiko_kirin]

Title: Shells
Author: keiko_kirin
Word count: 200
Concrit?: Yes
Pairing: JaeSu
Rating: G
Summary: A moment shifts like sand on the Bora Bora shore.

Comments

[twhitesakura]

I really love this, especially the last two paragraphs. The fic's got this wonderful elusive feeling that can't really be explained, like the way Junsu sees something different but can't quite figure out what.

[keiko_kirin]

I was afraid it might be *too* elusive :( so I'm glad it worked for you! Thank you!

[augurscourtesan]

*sighs*

::will follow your fic forever::

*sighs again*

[keiko_kirin]

Thank you!! ^__^