Spectrum (drabble challenge 74: When i see you smile)

Dec 05, 2009 17:37

Title: Spectrum
Author: beauty0fparting
Word Count: 200
Concrit: Sure
Rating: G
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong

The seven times Jaejoong saw Yoochun smile, he completed a rainbow. )

a: beauty0fparting, c: when i see you smile

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byuldeureul December 6 2009, 01:55:50 UTC

Beautiful, just like the colors &various shades &hues of the rainbow. ♥ Just like JaeChun should be.

I really loved the idea behind this right when I read the summary -- and once I read the very first lines of this fic, I knew I would enjoy it. :'] (It's always great to read this pairing every time I'm feeling melancholy. Srsly. ;; Even when it's angst, I feel like I can smile somehow. JaeChuuuuun, my not-so-secret pairing bias >w<)

Thank you for sharing this. I loved every word ^^ I really did.

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keiko_kirin December 6 2009, 02:35:01 UTC
I love the structure of this using the colors, and the build-up from giddiness to melancholy. It seems fitting for this pair for some reason. Very evocative!

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p.s. [mod mode] keiko_kirin December 8 2009, 06:17:11 UTC
p.s.: I added the tags for you (author tag & challenge tag) so the entry can be found more easily in future. :)

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riofrio December 17 2009, 06:22:46 UTC
it's a different kind of good but good nonetheless.. i particularly love blue and indigo..~<3

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