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black on white, dark on light (open challenge: eavesdrop)

Nov 13, 2009 00:05

title black on white, dark on light
author delphien
word count 513
rating g
pairing jaejoong/yoochun
concrit yes please

a/n another drabble that got too long :P

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As the clock ticks the minutes away, the silence stretches on and rings in your ears and you have the urge to get up and do something, anythingYou switch the TV on, but ( Read more... )

c: eavesdrop, c: open challenge, a: delphien

Comments 4

heijihatsutori November 13 2009, 10:37:45 UTC

This is beautiful...

'his own contradiction like black on white and dark on light'

Love this! ^^

delphien November 13 2009, 12:26:39 UTC

♥thank you! :D

keiko_kirin November 15 2009, 19:18:36 UTC

This was beautiful:
And oh, you should have known.
Known that it was a heart-wrenching ballad with feelings soaked in yet meant for nobody and everybody.
To a melody that you can't hear.

Very evocative!

delphien November 15 2009, 19:34:31 UTC

thank you, thank you :)
i'm glad you like it! ♥