definitive (drabble challenge 56: afterlife)

Apr 28, 2009 23:30

Title: definitive
Author: florentineeggs
Word Count: 200.
Rating: PG
Concrit: ♥
Summary: the following takes place between 3:47am and 4:01am, toho-household time. jaejoong, yoochun, and changmin are midnight gas tanks. and maybe they wouldn't have it any other way.
Author Notes: a different take on the word 'afterlife'!

insecurities that hide in your mouth all day and come spilling out the second you let yourself breathe )

c: afterlife, a: florentineeggs

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thevirginia April 29 2009, 06:57:40 UTC
HAH! so amused. and i really like their answers that you've written (crying, that sentence sounds so wrong); it seems very characteristic of their personalities in real life :)

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florentineeggs April 29 2009, 07:44:25 UTC
rpf makes comments so weird sometimes;; thank you very much! (: i've been fighting a massive writers block for the past few weeks and i'm glad it didn't show.

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essyllus April 29 2009, 06:58:00 UTC
this. THIIIIS.

bawling, everything is so, so perfect. i love dialogue pieces, and i love this. :)

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florentineeggs April 29 2009, 07:44:14 UTC
dkfajld thank youuuu :') jaeminchun dialogue = ridic fun and so easy. i'm glad you enjoyed it ♥

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xiahtic April 29 2009, 07:08:41 UTC
lakjsd crying changmin as a gynecologist. priceless ♥

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florentineeggs April 29 2009, 07:45:30 UTC
i think he'd be an amazing gynecologist. i, for one, would feel very safe in his expert hands-- pfffff ♥

thank you (((:

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chloe1910 April 29 2009, 08:18:31 UTC
hahahaha....this is so adorably silly and funny.
Changmin, you are truly a genius...what a way to get the tteokbokki...

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florentineeggs April 29 2009, 08:38:12 UTC
thank youuu ♥
he could be serious about the gynecology......... ;|

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kurogoma April 29 2009, 12:40:34 UTC
jaeminchun ~ such a fun, deadly OT3. jaejoong is just a sucker, yoochun is changmin's partner in crime, and min? he rules the world.

people need to write them together more often. :D

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florentineeggs April 29 2009, 17:11:49 UTC
helllll yeah ♥ agreeing with everything here, especially that last point :D

thanks for reading!

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