Dandelion; Daydream. (Flashfic Challenge 25: Without Holding)
Title: Dandelion; Daydream.
Author: kayjayloves
Word Count: 608
Pairing: Jaesu
Concrit: yes'm
Rating: PG
Summary: He never liked summer much; it still reminds him too much of dandelion memories, the kind that plant roots and grow weeds in the wasteland of his thoughts.
Notes: for purplehaze_33 as very late birthday gift ♥
( on the highway with only his wallet and the note taped to the dashboard )
Author: kayjayloves
Word Count: 608
Pairing: Jaesu
Concrit: yes'm
Rating: PG
Summary: He never liked summer much; it still reminds him too much of dandelion memories, the kind that plant roots and grow weeds in the wasteland of his thoughts.
Notes: for purplehaze_33 as very late birthday gift ♥
( on the highway with only his wallet and the note taped to the dashboard )
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Your writing never fails to impress me, make me jealous and move me in some sort of way. Honestly, this is beautiful. Let's forget for a moment that everything you write is.
I love Jaejoong in this. He's just so in love and it's kind of, heartbreakingly lovely?
Junsu always was a bit of an angel.
I really like this, I see Junsu entirely in this way ♥
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You know, I think that really is the focal point of this - the fact that Jaejoong is just so.. they're both just caught in each other. While I wrote it I was falling in love with them.
Thank you, bb. ♥
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You've captured the fragility that always makes me think of Jaesu and this has this whimsical feel to it. Jaesu always makes me think of gorgeousness, bittersweet love, and emotions.
And I found them all here. And your Junsu makes me want to take him home in my pocket and make sure he never leaves again.
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Guh, the way you describe Jaesu is exactly the way I see them -- They really do have that fragility to them, don't they? GUH. I need to stop loving them, they're going to take over my OTPs xD
Thanks for the comment, bb <33
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ADKLAJS ALONG WITH THE AMOUNT OF KEYSMASH.
S-So the heart in Ohio is actually from a song, in a subconscious attempt to draw in references into the fic. ='D
I'M SO GLAD YOU NOTICED THE YOOCHUN/JAEJOONG SCENE. THAT, HONESTLY, WAS MY FAVORITE PART. DURING THIS WHOLE THING I WAS LIKE, AWW KOREAN-AMERICAN AU YOOCHUN IS SUCH A COOL CHARACTER.
i'm guessing it should be, but can you explain to me the difference? :/ no one's been able to get it through to me
WRITE WRITE WRITE.
...WRIITE.
ILU BB. AND THE WAY YOU'RE MAKING ME GO ALL CAPS :| ♥
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♥
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♥!!
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