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Contest Entry 5: and so pride goeth

Mar 01, 2009 11:10

Title: and so pride goeth
Author: xyrhe
Word count: 2444
Concrit?: yup
Pairing: yoochun/junsu; junsu/seungri; implied yunho/jaejoong
Rating: nc-17
Summary: yoochun's sort of a control freak.
Author's Notes: stream of consciousness, disjointed time frames
Challenge: vulnerability, walking out

( and so pride goeth )

c: walking out, c: vulnerability, a: xyrhe, m: contest09

Comments 15

kayjayloves March 1 2009, 20:33:12 UTC

this is intensely amazing and gorgeous. it takes this look at yoochun that people seem to avoid and yet, really, it pulls out the selfishness and the humanity that's so obvious in him.

way to take idolized characters and make them beautifully human, in the middle of a gritty love story. ♥ memming, for sure.

drugsex March 10 2009, 21:27:21 UTC

thank you so much! flawed characters are so much more fun to write and read, i think.

morninglory17 March 1 2009, 21:12:43 UTC

i think i like this a lot...but i can't tell.

no, there are definitely some parts i loved. :)

drugsex March 10 2009, 21:28:11 UTC

well there's nothing more than i can ask for -- some parts is enough!

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drugsex March 10 2009, 21:28:38 UTC

thank you!

florentineeggs March 2 2009, 03:18:26 UTC

ohmygod so fantastic lskadfjaslk are we voting yet? no? WHATEVER VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE LKDJFKALSDJKLDS I don't even like yoosu ): your yoochun is amazing, your junsu so on spot to how I've always pictured him but a) never ever see b) too pussy to write and the fact that it's so messy makes me feel like I'm staring into yoochun's brain or smth 8| bluh. so perfect. mem'ing it, can't wait to find out who you are because I am going to dig through all of your fic and read myself silly.

♥!!

drugsex March 10 2009, 21:35:45 UTC

aw shucks i'm so flattered and i'm happy that you took the time to read a pairing that doesn't really strike your fancy.

this is actually my first foray into the dbsk fandom so i'm sorry that i haven't written anything else but hopefully this'll change soon

thanks for reading!

florentineeggs March 10 2009, 21:52:19 UTC

oh yes please! write more D: your style is fantastic and so attention grabbing ♥

and not at all (:

itsplashes March 2 2009, 04:24:00 UTC

*cry* Damn, I'm so torn. Who to vote for now? D:
But, this is amazing, and I think I might know who you are but I might be wrong so I'll just wait in anticipation. Memming because this is too gorgeous and just so them. I like the way you wrote your Junsu and Yoochun, guh. <3

drugsex March 10 2009, 21:36:52 UTC

thank you! i'm happy you liked the characterizations & congrats