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Contest Entry 3: Best Friends

Feb 24, 2009 15:43

Title: Best Friends
Author: hoyah
Word count: 250
Concrit?: Yes.
Pairing: YunHo/ChangMin
Rating: G
Summary: Friday afternoon, JunSu slams the door to the communal bathroom and locks himself in, YunHo goes for a run, JaeJoong eats dinner alone, and ChangMin doesn't even look up from his laptop.
Challenge: Walking Out

( Friday afternoon, JunSu slams the door to the communal bathroom and locks himself in, YunHo goes for a run, JaeJoong eats dinner alone, and ChangMin doesn't even look up from his laptop. )

c: walking out, a: hoyah, m: contest09

Comments 2

chloe1910 February 25 2009, 01:50:04 UTC

BFF!Homin pwns...but what I really love here is the OT5ness..when one(two here) is upset, it affects everyone..one for all and all for one..♥

thevirginia March 3 2009, 23:29:12 UTC

I like how you added the details of what they all do (or don't do) when they're angry & the ending is really cute. As for concrit, I think if you delved deeper into a specific point of view & the feelings from that pov this would be even better :)