No One's Fault (Flashfic Challenge 20: Now or Never)

[mormorando]

Title: No One's Fault
Author: mormorando
Word count: 2,900
Concrit?: yes, pls.
Pairing: Yoosu + Jaejoong
Rating: NC17
A/N: this is way too much porn. and i thought i could cap this at 2500. whatever, self.

Comments

[oldwillow_brook]

"There isn't any room for me. There never was."

You broke my heart. You broke my OT3 heart into pieces and its crying! CAN YOU HEAR IT CRYING!? ;______________________________________;

But I knew it was coming. Somewhere deep inside of me knew that Jaejoong was not going to fit. He isn't apart of this circle, he just was a lucky bystander and it hurts but its what has to be done.

I think where I figured it out was when Changmin catches Jaejoong watching Junsu and Yoochun and it was kind of something interesting. It was more of the idea of wanting to make someone feel like that, and more of the idea that he could do that to someone that intrigued him. Rather then the love that Junsu and Yoochun shared. Does that make any sense?

And this was so bitter sweet. Because of its stroke into reality it hurts but its nice to know that Jaejoong takes this with a warm, broken heart. Not angry or over emotional. He takes it because its simple and what is the truth.

♥ because I loved it.

[kallistei]

:(

[kallistei]

:( Jaemin sequel.

[chloe1910]

T_________T

Poor Jaejoong...the realisation that there were never room for him must have been damn hurtful...but then again, after last night, it doesn't seems like it's just pity the Yoosu are feeling towards Jae...hm...

Is there a little one-sided Jaemin I spy there?? Would there be a sequel to this?

[swoon21]

I really like the story. So sad... But beautifully written.

[krillia]

Great. Now I have to go to bed with a broken heart. Thanks for that.

Seriously, though, it really is beautifully written and I liked it a great deal